[FridayFlash] The End of the World

Trying something a little different this week. Would love to hear any feedback.

If you’re in the mood for some holiday-themed short fiction, feel free to check out some of my other stories!

And a bonus holiday how-not-to video:

And be sure to check out all the other great fiction at the #FridayFlash Collector, too!  Thanks, and Happy Friday!


THE END OF THE WORLD

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© 2012 Elizabeth Ditty
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5 thoughts on “[FridayFlash] The End of the World

  1. John Wiswell says:

    I like the instant message gimmick. It’s a good grounds for a dialogue-based story.

    I had trouble with the opening. Are you sure that “What this time?” is supposed to belong to the blue speaker? Because Blue initiates the conversation about the world ending, then seems to ask White what the matter is, even though Blue is the one with the world-ending complaint. If Blue is supposed to have that line, then perhaps there should be more of a transition after “Again?”

    • Elizabeth Ditty says:

      You are correct! I was trying to jimmy this together last night with my eyes half-closing, & I thought before I went to bed that maybe I’d messed something up, but I was too tired to deal with it. 🙂 Hopefully people will see your comment & figure it out!

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